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SEC marking approach · The Tempest · PCLM

Past SEC cycleThe Tempest is not the current prescribed single-text Shakespeare play for the 2026, 2027, or 2028 Leaving Cert cycles.Use this page for older paper practice or when your teacher has assigned Tempest essays as cross-play preparation.

Use The Tempest for archive practice and cross-play preparation.

This page is better for planning arguments and revising old single-text angles than for presenting it as the current Leaving Cert text.

Past-paper builder

The Tempest Essay Builder

Use this to turn older-paper questions into deliberate exam practice instead of vague revision.

Built against: (2021) "Chaos and confusion are used to great effect throughout Shakespeare's play, The Tempest." Discuss the above statement, developing your response with reference to the text.

Top-band Leaving Cert answer target

A strong H1/H2-style single-text answer that sounds purposeful, controlled, and analytical.

Positioning

Build this answer as if it must satisfy every PCLM criterion, not just sound generally intelligent.

Opening move

Open by answering "Chaos and confusion are used to great effect throughout Shakespeare's play, The Tempest." Discuss the above statement, developing your response with reference to the text. directly. State that Shakespeare uses power through prospero and control to shape the audience's judgement, and signal the three moments you will track instead of giving plot background.

Criteria checklist
  • Purpose: keep the exact question wording visible in every paragraph.
  • Coherence: build a clear progression from thesis to final judgement.
  • Language: use precise quotations and explain how Shakespeare creates the effect.
  • Mechanics: keep expression sharp enough that the argument feels assured.
  • Current priority: make the argument sound deliberate rather than descriptive.
Paragraph 1: establish the argument early

Job: Start with Shakespeare's first strong presentation of power and link it immediately to prospero and control.

Evidence: Use one precise quotation from an early key scene and explain what it reveals, not just what happens around it.

Examiner move: Tie the quotation back to the exact wording of the question before moving on.

Paragraph 2: prove the turning point

Job: Move to the scene where power becomes sharper, more dangerous, or more revealing.

Evidence: Use a quotation from the turning-point scene to show Shakespeare intensifying the issue through language, dramatic method, or structural contrast.

Examiner move: Make the paragraph feel evaluative by judging how strongly this moment shapes the audience response.

Paragraph 3: finish with consequence and judgement

Job: End on the consequences of power so the paragraph does more than repeat earlier analysis.

Evidence: Use a final quotation that proves consequence or resolution to prove what Shakespeare ultimately wants the audience to understand.

Examiner move: Finish with a sentence that sounds like a verdict, not a summary.

Conclusion

Return to the exact question and deliver a final judgement: Shakespeare makes prospero and control compelling because power exposes something deeper about character, power, or moral order. Keep the conclusion short, decisive, and evaluative.

Final pass before you submit
  • Keep the question words visible: "Chaos and confusion are used to great effect throughout Shakespeare's play, The Tempest."…
  • Make every paragraph do one clear argumentative job.
  • Use quotations as proof for an argument, not as decoration.
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Past paper archive

Current prescribed-material circulars for 2026, 2027, and 2028 do not list The Tempest as the single-text Shakespeare option.

2021

"Chaos and confusion are used to great effect throughout Shakespeare's play, The Tempest." Discuss the above statement, developing your response with reference to the text.

2021

A production of Shakespeare's play, The Tempest, in which the characters of Caliban and Miranda do not appear has been proposed. Discuss the reasons why, in your opinion, the removal of each of these characters would or would not diminish Shakespeare's play, The Tempest. Develop your response with reference to the text.